When sorrow comes
The followings are worrisome
You are going to be alone
No one will live in your town
You are the one who is blamed
For matters that are untamed
be safe and fighting
be the life delighting
Never be tainted by what others say
Be strong, never change your way
Happiness will come back again
The past will fall like rain
The joy’s seed, grow green
go on, be proud of what you’ve been
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Awesome ideas within these lines.
What an amazing write up.
Thumbs up ma’am.
قريبا تسكن الآلام ويبدل الله ترحك بالفرح وخذلانك بالنصر
Very impressive 👏keep it up 🌹
Your words touch the heart pretty much..wishing you the best🌷
Thank you very much indeed for your wonderful words.
I liked the part” be strong never change ur way” you re awesome ‘queen’
Highly emotional, very inspiring and touches feelings 🌷💖
I appreciate your gorgeous comments. 🌸🌸🌸
Never be tainted by what others say
Be strong, never change your way
Happiness will come back again
The past will fall like rain
The joy’s seed, grow green
go on, be proud of what you’ve been
Theses lines are really smart and intelligent. Highly emotional, It touches the heart….. always be happy and never give up.
Such a rhetorical poem !
I like it, in particular the following:
“the past will fall like rain”
All we experience in life is an episode of a long series.
What a nice piece it is!!!
Dear Amel, I like ur words they r warm and so beautiful. Allah bless u
Dear friends
Highly appreciate your support.
Thank you very much indeed.
Impressive… Go ahead and believe in your words.. that everythig will change to be better..
Love and miss you
I cherish you so much darling.
This poem is a beautiful testament by Amal to resilience in the face of hardship. The imagery of sorrow as a visitor and the town emptying out effectively portrays the feeling of isolation that can accompany suffering. The encouragement to “be safe and fighting” and to “never be tainted by what others say” offers a powerful message of self-preservation and inner strength. The final lines, with the metaphor of joy’s seed waiting to grow green, provide a hopeful image of future happiness blooming after the rain of the past. It’s a message of perseverance that can resonate with anyone struggling through difficult times.
Amazing poem.
Strong words would touch everyone’s heart, well done