WRONG NAMES
Human always blame wolves
For killing just to survive
And a man who has loaves
Would from others deprive.
Should animals be called wild?
Good merits be called humane?
Both terms are no more valid
For each action are unlike domain
Words should be more accurate
To name objects as they are built
To know that a defender is a patriot
And terrorist who makes tumult
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A Man
Discovering all what you say is a fake
A mystery found in Top of The Lake
You never want to give but take
And never want to miss a part of the cake
Using smooth skin like a poisoning snake
Even if you update your archaic
You will surely lose all what you like
Nor any heart you will shake
When will you stop or take a break?
To reach manhood for Heaven’s sake?
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Remediation
Why is there hatred
Why making betrayal
Of this we can get rid
By following love tutorial
Why there is a criminal
Why there is a cheater
Let’s be more rational
And be peace tweeter
Just start this signal
There must be no later
For humanity not regional
Be sedater for hater
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As usual very impressive and eloquent words you have chosen in your outstanding poems . So proud of you and keep it up 💎😃🌹
Thank you so much, my dear friend! Your kind words and constant support truly mean a lot to me. I’m so happy and grateful that you enjoy my poems—it gives me even more motivation to keep writing. Your pride in me touches my heart. I’ll definitely keep it up!
Well said dear poet, man is wild by nature. 😬
Thank you, my dear friend. Your words hold truth—there’s a wildness in human nature, but also a deep capacity for growth and transformation. I appreciate you reading and reflecting on my poem. It means a lot coming from you
Actually your poems are masterpiece!
I just read many times all your three poems especially (a man)
It is so awesome! I am so blessed to have such a talented, Genius, intellectual friend like you.
Please never quit writing poems.
Your name is Amal, if we translate it to English it is Hope , so you are the hope of Iraqis! ❤️
Your words truly touched my heart—thank you so much! It means the world to me that you took the time to read my poems, especially A Man. Knowing that my writing resonates with you gives me the strength to keep going. I’m incredibly grateful to have a friend like you who believes in me so deeply. And yes, if my name means Hope, then I’ll do my best to live up to it—not just for Iraqis, but for everyone who finds meaning in my words. I promise I won’t stop writing. Thank you again, from the bottom of my hear
Your poems beautifully capture the deep yearning for a kinder, more peaceful world. The message is clear and simple yet profound—love over hate, peace over conflict. It’s a reminder that change starts with each of us.
Nice work dear.
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging words. It truly means a lot coming from you. I’m humbled that the message came through clearly—writing from the heart about hope, love, and peace is something I deeply believe in. Your support inspires me to keep going and continue sharing what I feel. I’m grateful for your kindness and guidance alw
As usual .. impressive.
Choosing the titles of your poems is really great..
For being wild human, I always believe that the humans are the most danger creatures on this earth ever…
Thank you for sharing another touchable poem .. Go ahead..
Thank you so much for your kind words and deep reflection. I truly appreciate that you noticed the thought behind the titles—choosing them is always a meaningful part of the process for me. And yes, I agree with you—humans can be both powerful creators and destructive forces. I’m grateful that the poem resonated with you. Your encouragement always lifts my spirit. I’ll definitely keep going
Nice style and words with smooth and sincere thoughts revealing real covered facts.
Best wishes, for further sparkling and creativity.
..Thank you so much for your kind words and deep reflection. I truly appreciate that you noticed the thoughts of the real covered facts.
I highly appreciate your nice wishes and awesome praises
reading your words feels like uncovering layers of truth wrapped in poetry. Each poem speaks with strength, wisdom, and such depth of thought. You challenge injustice, expose falsehood, and still manage to plant hope where there’s pain. Your way of seeing the world—with clarity, compassion, and courage—moves me deeply. I see not just a poet in you, but a soul unafraid to speak what many stay silent about. I’m so proud to be your daughter, and I carry your words—and your heart—with me always
Your ability to blend emotion with message is so impressive، every line shows your talent and strong sense of purpose. I’m so proud of you as a poet and as a person. Keep writing and inspiring others with your beautiful mind and heart.🌷
The world has become deceitful.
And it doesn’t dare to call things by their true names.
Wonderful words as usual